Open Poetry #25 |
Abduction |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah.....WOW outstanding my friend..... blow me away .......... I must have had my momma's will |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
nice one mate i had some trouble understanding some of the words but what the heck good work |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah my sidekick...your poetry grows in leaps and bounds.. Wonderful and profound write! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!! But I really liked it. Had a lot of truth. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...you really have an outstanding control of the English language...makes me feel lacking...James |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
How I've missed your work! Sheer brillance! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
wow |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Jeepers Noah!! This one is a knockout! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful poem. I had to read it more than once to grasp it fully, but it was really worth the extra effort! You stand your ground! Your mom should be proud! Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...Very touching write. The depth of your writing leaves me in awe of your talent. Not sure if this is right, but what I get from this poem is the dangers faced by the young children each day on the streets where their souls are abducted and mothers grieve for them and wait for them to return home...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - just astounding - I feel the same as James - somehow though I was left more with the feeling of a young son going off to war never to return . . . xxoo |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
congratualtions Noah arthur |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this just reminds me of times my sister dissapeared and I still kept setting the table for her... or after my grandpas death, I set the table for him so many times... but its alright, we don't eat at the table anymore, and things are working for the best. This is powerful noah.. very strong! Well done. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woah, Noah! I'm wordless... I'm not sure I understood it all, but I am in awe. Wow... Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ditto :-) KS |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
WOW! .....thinking of proper descriptive words now....vocabulary too small.....giving up and just saying -- Gee whiz, what a poem! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah...Powerful and touching...An amazing write, my friend. |
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Shawna Fitzgerald Junior Member
since 2003-10-09
Posts 11 |
noah that was the best i've read so far out of the ones i read from you love shawna p.s. krystopher told me that i should read your poems |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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