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A Slip of Poem
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A Slip of Poem |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Slip of Poem… Unlike a fragrant Ladyslipper, A slip of poem Will not perish… It travels simply, Whether in one’s pocket, Or heart, And is reminisced easily In one’s mind. A slip of poem Brings with it Tender thoughts, And winsome wonderings It can be a gift, Or solace It can speak for One’s mind Leaving nothing to the Imagination Or tell of love Unrequited A slip of poem Can be an introduction Or a goodbye. More than a hallmark, It is knowing That one cared enough To pen the very best… And this is why I care to leave A slip of poem. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-01-2003 05:44 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The spirit of the write is absolutely on the money! What a wonderful way to explain the power and immortality of this gift. TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You sure slipped that one over.  |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Your poem makes me want to carry a pad of paper around with me. I sometimes come up with what I believe is a good idea, and then simply forget it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TD, exactly what I had hoped some would see...thank you! Sy, slip something over you? Never...   rk...exactly...thank you! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another lovely little gift from our Sunshiney one. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A slip of poem is as beautiful as a ladyslipper's fragrance... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I just love your slip of a poem!! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Agree! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, I always love your slips of poem..  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
A slip of poem, like a piece of your heart emotions put into words. Beautiful...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You do know how to slip a poem right into my heart. This is delightful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful wonderful  love the new pic! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
And, when you do leave your slips of poems, they are always such a delight. Thank you, Karilea! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words slip into my heart lady....so very much held in this lil slip of poetry here.. btw* Love that new pic, now would you let this one here... PLEASE....... You do what you do and you pay for your sins and there is no such thing as what might have been, thats a waste of time..... drive a man out of his mind. (sung by Tim McGraw) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-02-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
truer words never written |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You just spilled poetic ink all over my thoughts~ Thank you ....~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a lovely slip of a poem. Reminding me why you are such a great writer. Sandra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah always a treat to read you.....thank you for sharing your Slip of Poem Charisma |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ you have such a lovely heart.....this is just beautiful....and I leave with a smile.... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It travels simply, Whether in one’s pocket, Or heart, And is reminisced easily In one’s mind. A slip of poem Brings with it Tender thoughts, And winsome wonderings It can be a gift, Or solace It can speak for One’s mind ========================= *smiling at Sys reply* lovely poetic word play ... clever and creative slip of the pen  |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Sunshine, why exactly isn't this peice of beauty submitted for print? Lovely, lovely, lovely! Sunkissed."I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, little one, thank you... Chris, I hope it was the slip-up you were waiting for! Scorpio, a lovely thought from you...thank you... Enchantress...thank you dear...you know I how take your comments to heart... Eliza...thank you, sweet poet... Ethel, every once in a while, a good slip-up, yes?...thank you! Paul, my pleasure...thank you! Martie...but of course. Exactly where it's meant to be! PS...thank you. Just a bit of sunlight to shoo away the winter doldrums... Sue, I am so glad you enjoyed this snippet...thank you! Yes, Donna...it will stay...just for a little while... Raph...kind words. Thank you so much! Marge, dip in...thank you my friend... Sandra, a humbling compliment, thank you... Virginia...thank you! Ah Lauren, there's my smile! Thank you... Yes, JM...just trying to follow your lead...thank you! Sunkissed...because three are enough. If you remind me, and when there's a fourth book? I shall... Thank you! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I love your slips of genius smiles and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cher, bless you, and thank you. |
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