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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-03-01 12:07 PM

Another Page

Life turned another season’s page
A winter moon has crossed the stage
And parchment lures a written dream
Of lupine blues on field of cream

The storms of March will some day cease
On lifeline’s deeply folded crease
Where waits the genesis of calm
At crossroads on a weathered palm

A page is blank except to place
My fingerprints on sheet of lace
My pen will draw a silhouette
Of joy that shadow’s life’s regret

Though it is God who will command
The path engraved upon my hand

Elizabeth Santos
3/1/03

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (03-01-2003 12:09 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-01 12:10 PM

Pages...are very special things,
aren't they, Elizabeth?

Hugs...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-03-01 12:32 PM

Elizabeth,
Everything you write just shines. Love Sy

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-01 02:55 PM

(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy it is March now and I long for the end of March when spring finally blooms, my favorite season of all, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God is with all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-01 04:07 PM

I need my path engraved...I think I got lost a long time ago

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-03-01 05:38 PM

enjoyed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-03-01 05:49 PM

Your style is so graceful. I enjoy reading your works so much. The last line of this was perfect. ThisDiamond

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-03-01 05:55 PM

I really enjoy your style, you write with such elegance and your soft descriptions support that in your work.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-03-02 12:03 PM

The storms of March will some day cease
On lifeline’s deeply folded crease
Where waits the genesis of calm
At crossroads on a weathered palm

Have I told you how much I enjoy what you write? Well I do.

Loved the message in your verse.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2003-03-02 04:41 AM

this is just perfect.. perfect rhyme, perfect message.. yes, perfect.
I love it

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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