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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-01 11:05 AM

The night burns with
a fire -
from a billion
distant
stars.

Yet this heat rises
from your merest
touch.

The day is alive with
the suns brilliant
passion.

And yet I am blinded
by your briefest
glance.

There is nothing small from you.

With a blink of your eyes
our worlds collide -
And I am left
unmade.

There is nothing hidden from you.

You find me in the ash -
and wish me as
a diamond.

And I am left
to shine in
your
hand.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-01 12:16 PM

Unmade...
yep...

liking that thought!

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2003-03-01 12:56 PM

Nice Job.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-01 01:32 PM

Eric, you have got to be happily in love to write such beautiful love poems...

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

4 posted 2003-03-01 01:34 PM

"... yet I am blinded
by your briefest
glance."
Lovers drink each other essence
with blind eyes,
the heart is enough to see
what eyes cannot show sometimes
... the clues.
Salute Ericc,
Etain.
I love this.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-01 01:53 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, this is precious, sweet friend, God Bless You, within all the black and white that diamond is lying beneath the soil and once the rainbow of a smile reflects it, all becomes so colorful! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-01 01:55 PM

just beautiful...that's all I can say...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2003-03-01 02:12 PM

This is wonderful. I am off to read more of your poems.
Sandra

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-03-01 03:47 PM

Catching my breath .... this is excellent poetry and reveals a diamond-like soul.
Love, Margherita

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

9 posted 2003-03-01 06:34 PM

This is such an amazingly beautiful poem... this is one of my all-time favorites. Such profound spiritual love... touches the soul at an incredible depth.

Thank you... for this breathtaking poem.

Love,
Moca

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-03-01 07:37 PM

This one positively shines brilliantly! BRAVO

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

11 posted 2003-03-01 07:41 PM

To be in love.....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-03-01 07:56 PM

enjoyed

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