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Shimlu
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 11

0 posted 2003-02-16 02:44 AM

Skylight drips upon the waters
Flowing freely into the endless gaze
No end to this wonder and hope
Sand seeping into your thoughts
Never another place like this

I take in the wind, feeling your prescence
The cold brisk water enlightens me for something more
Can I just run the distance to see you again
See you once more in this peaceful serenity of life
Once more is all I ask from you

Moonlight fills me with wonder of how
Of how this came to be
However it did, I know you'll always be wondering with me
Stretching out across the sandy floor of this forbidden place
Did I make it finally to you.....I can always wonder

The stars of this blissful night fill my vision
The awe that is the universe.....
How much longer will it take for me to find it
This imageless imagination takes me places
Farther then I ever would have wanted to go

Along the trail of this mystical beauty I find you
Dreaming upon a log, looking to the sky for guidance
I take your hand so gently that it feels like air with mine
Can we just find the answer together I need it
Just feel the vast amount of warmth now

Were almost there now
Reaching out to the endless blue

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-02-16 02:54 AM

Beautiful first post, very Zen. Welcome to PIP

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-02-16 03:11 AM

wow! beautiful!

Welcome to Passions!

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-02-16 03:25 AM

Welcome to Passions Friend!

I am sure you will enjoy all the diverse poetry and thought that our family has to offer. If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact myself or any of the other moderators. Write on!

ps: check your mailbox for a special surprise.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-02-16 03:31 AM

this is such a beautiful first post...welcome. I am definately looking forward to more from your pen!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-02-16 05:23 AM

Very eastern in overtones and very beautiful.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-02-16 07:16 AM

Welcome to Passions, Shimlu.
You're going to enjoy yourself...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-02-16 08:23 AM

breathe in, breathe out,
all together now,
ooooooooomm
bliss of the beach

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

8 posted 2003-02-16 08:31 AM

etheral beauty

hmmmmmmmmmm.... nice

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-02-16 09:03 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2003-02-16 09:34 AM

oh my its like you read my mind...
Ive just recently seen the ocean for the first time and I am still high from the beauty of the blue. This is lovely..so surreal and romantic.
Welcome to Poetry Land ...so nice to meet you.

" ... and I never saw blue like that before."

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-02-16 10:09 AM

Welcome to Passions, Shimlu! A lovely post to mark your day-bue!--or is that "debut"?!? tehe Do you love to read and write poetry?--then you have come to the right spot!

Love, Light & Laughter,
Earth Angel

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2003-02-16 10:44 AM

Welcome Shimlu. I felt myself floating on a meditative breath of fresh air with this post. Thank you so much.

May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

13 posted 2003-02-16 11:25 AM

Welcome to passions Shimli.you have made quite the entrance.Nice write.
Jason

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-02-16 12:51 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY
Shimlu
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.
I heartily welcome you here to this great big
family of friends. I really enjoyed your
first post and look forward to
reading more of your work. It
looks like you will fit
right in here. Look
around in all the
forums and have
lots of
fun.
.
.

.
.
Ethel.....garysgirl

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2003-02-16 03:04 PM

(smiles) Oh Shimlu, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this had me wishing I was right by the oceanside and could breath the salt of the ocean and pirouette on the sand dunes, yay, this is a wonderful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Shimlu, may you be inspireed by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shimlu, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2003-02-16 03:56 PM

Welcome to passions......beautiful entrance you made here.....hope to see many more

Charisma

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

17 posted 2003-02-16 04:24 PM

Excellent presentation. Welcome to Pip.
Much enjoyed this beautiful write. ThisDiamond

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

18 posted 2003-02-16 04:40 PM

Very beautiful first post. Welcome to Passions!

Shimlu
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 11

19 posted 2003-02-16 04:58 PM

Thanks for all your wonderful responses. I hope to share my words on all your poetry soon too.

Shlee
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

20 posted 2003-02-17 06:42 PM

I loved it

It was as if I was actually at the ocean. It awakened all my senses and brought back some lovely memories. Thank you

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

21 posted 2003-02-27 12:11 PM

You write of one of my most favorite places....Wonderful write!!!!

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

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