Open Poetry #25 |
Push Nose, Waive Hair |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sitting alone in the dead of night Wondering about you; where you are: Are you sleeping? Are you awake? Are you alone tonight, Or have you looked to another To make the night pass without lonliness or fear? Does sleep come easily to you, Or is your mind restless; troubled? Are you dreaming? Is your sleep still? Are you peaceful and calm, Or are your eyes filling with more tears For the loves, once held so dear, yet so often forgot. *just for everyone's knowledge... "push nose" is the deaf sign for "stuck up" and flipping, or "waiveing" your hair is the sign for Blonde... The rest, I'm sure you can figure. [This message has been edited by Ringo (03-01-2003 02:29 AM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice title...:-) creative as much as it may kill us sometimes...we need to be glad that 'they' have someone to be there for them, even if it can't be us... awesome job....but you didn't submit it for the book, so I can't vote |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Book??? Damn, maybe I should read the directions, huh???? lol Is there anyway to edit that to where I can submit it? |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
That hits home. I stay up all night because I can not sleep. I constantly wonder what she's doing and if she feels the same way I do. Good poem, but why did you have to bring it up? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love that! Thanks for the explanation about signing... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ringo, this is wonderfully inventive, sweet friend, I never knew that and what a great euphemism to throw at those who take the fact that someone out there cares for granted! (big huggssssss) You are amazing, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ringo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Interesting. Thank you for giving a description for the words, I find that makes this unusual. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - hehehe my son and I know sign . . . Often wonder the same thoughts myself then just close my eyes . . . nice write again xxoo |
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