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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-03-03 02:00 AM

Close me in behind the blinds
strike the chords and pull the strings
slide the silk between the folds
slipping softly under down
turn the dimmer switch to low
let the light play on my dreams
creased between the shadows
tap dancing on the wall
slow the rhythm of my heart beat
easy in the tempo~

~*~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-03-2003 02:27 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-03 02:04 AM

Blues - reminded me of Lady Day at her best - you brought me there . . . xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-03-03 02:13 AM

Thanks for the nice comments littlewing~
So glad I could take you half way there.

Goodnight now~ my times up!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-03 08:47 AM

Very lovely...much enjoyed Lori.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

4 posted 2003-03-03 09:01 AM

Enchanting
Sweet dreams
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-03 09:10 AM

(smiles) Oh Lori, this is lovely, sweet friend, your words always dance and sway with grace, yay! (kiss on cheek) This brought a smile to my face and melody to my mind, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-03-03 11:21 AM

Lori...Felt like a song, it did. Lovely!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-03-03 11:23 AM

I like the feel of silk...
M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-03-03 11:48 AM

BluesSerenade
All that before you go to sleep? Enjoyed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-03-03 12:21 PM

OK, so now my feet are moving under the desk...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-03 01:04 PM

beautiful

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-03-03 08:07 PM

smooth as silk, under feet, making love on the beach, gee i wish it would warm up already in the northeast, how am i gonna do that in the snow?

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

12 posted 2003-03-03 08:25 PM

lovely little night melody of images

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

13 posted 2003-03-03 11:21 PM

Funny thing, Bluesy

This reads a bit like a witch I know. You been reading too much of her? Or finding a new voice in your writes.

This is really very good. I like the new "musicality"

Ed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2003-03-03 11:55 PM

Thank you all so much for reading my sleepy dream. And no wranx, I do not aspire to be a witch, I wouldn't know how to pull it off if I tried. Pick a card, any card and I'll get it wrong every time.

Warm hugs all around~

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