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And Then You Smiled
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And Then You Smiled |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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And Then You Smiled My head was bowed in deep concern with fretful thoughts that spin and churn And as I walked, I could not see For troubles would not set me free And then you smiled, as I passed by and looked into my woeful eye unleashing joy from deep inside that drew a smile I could not hide No spoken word, just gleaming eyes that captured me like midnight skies A stranger’s face, a sudden glee dissolved the things that worried me How small the gesture meant to please An inadvertent glance to ease a heavy heart. A little smile that made it all become worthwhile Elizabeth Santos 2/28/03 |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All I can say is beautiful, Liz.....  Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too smiled reading this, it is a belssing how smiles are contagious! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Its so perty. How very powerful a smile can be. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--Now, I bet you will remember this smile and give it back again and again.  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
 There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
 Here's a gigantic smile for you! Beautiful and touching, as always, Elizabeth! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's amazing what a simple smile can do |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NOW! March steps off on the right foot...thank you Elizabeth! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Elizabeth, this is beautifullu written, as usual. Sometimes, just a smile can make someones day so much better. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Elizabeth~ Lovely thoughts. Thanks for sharing with us. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
 Thanks for the smiles tonight. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ AND .... thank YOU for the *smile* I'm wearing at this moment~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
when I saw the title to this I smiled right away because I knew that any poetry coming from you.. especially with a title such as this(!) would bring a smile to my face. I wasn't disappointed in the least. Thank you Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you all so much for your gracious comments. I appreciate your kind words Liz |
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