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Catch and Release (senryu)
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Catch and Release (senryu) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Catch and release not as harmless as one would think hooks always leave scars |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So true this poem is. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ouch! Sharp and to the point!---but done so poetically... Warm hugs, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Interesting write critter......(senryu?...I didn't know you studied Martial Arts?)..have a good weekend [This message has been edited by Toerag (02-28-2003 04:28 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ouch, again, out for blood, huh? good tho |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Catch and release works...habitat destruction and pollution and public apathy will scar the earth. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Not a literal catch and release my usual human condition/abandonement metaphor kind of way, thanks all and yes Toerag i learned from the best martial artist of all time Spruce Tree..oh god i'm so out of it giggling insanely need sleep see you all later maybe.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) So very true, sweet friend, I too know that sting and hope we can all set ourselves free before the hook catches in the first place! (sigh) This is well said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Liked this a lot. Also enjoy your sense of humor....in one of your replies. I too get that rummy. Smiles. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed this concentrated truth. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, you know I like this little Japanese verse. You did it very well, too...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
glad you did vandana Thanks sunshine Noah great point thanks Pat  Grazie Margherita thanks Ethel they're a great way to get the creative juices flowing when im stuck |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn skippy! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks dixie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Tis a fishy story about the one that got away, but a true tale also. Good Work! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
An excellent Senryu Raph. enjoyed. Maree |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Kethry and Maree anybody else fro Auzzie want to chime in lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - I have many of those myself - the scars - painful - this one left me kind of short of breath xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
breathe littlewing breathe |
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