Open Poetry #25 |
Holding Love's Ladder |
Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Holding Love’s Ladder Now I’m not a man of good looks one might say An occasional dog have I frightened away Nor have I been blessed with unusual wit You might call me dull, and I’m sure of it But still there are women who must’ve found worse ‘Cause I’m often in love, although it’s a curse Of short-lived affairs, my life’s been a parade Although I’ve loved many, not one has stayed And each time I’m told that they’ve found someone better (That’s not the best news to receive in a letter) They say they’ve all found the young man of their dreams Though they’d like to remain friends of mine, so it seems And that leaves me to ponder my sad little plight Will I ever be anyone’s real Mr. Right Am I just a step in the stairway of love A person whom no one will ever dream of But thinking that way, well it just makes me sadder I guess you could say that I’m holding love’s ladder I’ve just helped another one find Mr. Right And I’ll still be her friend . . . but just not tonight |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I really liked this - the man's point of view in the world of "hopeful romance." Well done. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fred, A delightful read, humility pesonified. A good one for the book. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey!!! You're the man of MY dreams!! It's nice to see you here. And if you're that ladder, please don't look up - never know what you'll see. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
howdy neighbor! good write, I enjoyed very much |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fred! You're home! Welcome back! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I see myself many times within this poem...does seem like its easier for some than others...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
That special someone will come you way, when you least expect it. In the mean time, we are happy to have you here to enjoy your beautiful poetry. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Loner, Thanks, glad you liked it Nightshade,It's just my perspective, thanks Sy, Thanks man, good to hear from you Sharon, Aw c'mon, that's the only good part of ladder holding! Passing Shadows, Thank you! Sunshine, Thaanks, it's always good being here James, Thanks, I appreciate your comments. fh |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Fred...I have a feeling, that along with having many friends, patience will pay off. Enjoyed this! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Fred... Why haven't you clicked on the "submit this for publication" in the book??... We NEED you to be included, ya know... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yeah, Fred, I don't know you, but I sure do like this poem. Besides being written so well, it sounds like I would imagine that a lot of men feel. I, myself, have had some really good men friends in my life....ones I loved as friends only. I'll check back to see if you submitted it for the book...... Ethel.....garysgirl |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. |
WOW! that's all i can really say, I must have read this poem about 5times now and ceases to amaze me well done mate |
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