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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-02-27 10:17 AM



The rain fell like sheets of glass breaking
on the ground
crashing oh so loud

But my mind was distracted by thoughts of you
as I waited for a chance to talk one more time before work called you away

Each moment is like the first time we spoke
new and interesting almost matching the storm beyond my window never two alike

I step outside and taste the water falling from the sky and it reminds me of your cool and soothing satin lips as I laugh and remember my childhood years playing in the rain

You bring new life to me and I hope I return the joy for I sit here and wait again to hear from the Lady of my dreams or the next rainfall to come
a drop at a time


© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-27 10:35 AM


beautiful piece!
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2 posted 2003-02-27 10:46 AM


Thomas,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2003-02-27 11:04 AM


Thomas, I love the way you did this one.
It's beautiful...
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Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-02-27 12:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Thomas, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always sing in the rain with the one you love to eternity! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, you have my showering vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-27 12:54 PM


sigh....love this!
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6 posted 2003-02-27 01:37 PM


*sighs* This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-04-17 09:06 AM


Simply lovely.....
Bridgette

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Thomas119gold
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8 posted 2003-04-17 09:52 AM


I appreciate all of your comments thank you
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