Open Poetry #25 |
Thoughts of rain drops |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
The rain fell like sheets of glass breaking on the ground crashing oh so loud But my mind was distracted by thoughts of you as I waited for a chance to talk one more time before work called you away Each moment is like the first time we spoke new and interesting almost matching the storm beyond my window never two alike I step outside and taste the water falling from the sky and it reminds me of your cool and soothing satin lips as I laugh and remember my childhood years playing in the rain You bring new life to me and I hope I return the joy for I sit here and wait again to hear from the Lady of my dreams or the next rainfall to come a drop at a time |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful piece! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thomas, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thomas, I love the way you did this one. It's beautiful... . . Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Thomas, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always sing in the rain with the one you love to eternity! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, you have my showering vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh....love this! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
*sighs* This is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Simply lovely..... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I appreciate all of your comments thank you |
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