Open Poetry #25 |
Darkness |
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Darkness I’m slipping into darkness A place I’ve seen before It is a place I do not want to be in But I can’t seem to find the door My dreams are fading fast I’m slipping into the past I can hold on to myself But the feeling isn’t right I wish to be held by another Someone to hold me at night "This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well written |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
To be held helps keep the dark away I like the concept loved the poem Thomas |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I have been in this darkness. It is not fun, but I can assure you, it will one day lift. Hugs, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this feeling well, you are not alone |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh yes! I have this same desire. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) I think we all dream of such a thing, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and I am confident soon you will have all you desire, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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