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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-15 11:31 PM

MUCH ADO
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/03

So this is how it feels
When daffodils become pied and daisies already peer
Fancy is bred deep where your heart spins like a sailors wheel
Upon these yellow sands December never felt so clear

Full many a magical evenings we are destined to seek
Your eyes are nothing like the sun, more lustrous than stained glass
That time of year seems to be coming back it seems
Where I fell in love with you all over again, at last...

So cover my graved thoughts with chenille
Sweet robin, your ode is all I aspire
I could die for you, then I could reincarnate and impel
Be your shield-bearer, acquire the rank of esquire

Much ado about nothing, but everything you are to me
In the marriage of true minds, our hearts also find a way
So mistress, lay back and breathe easily
As I compare you to a morning in May...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2003 11:40 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-15 11:36 PM

Beautiful Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-02-15 11:54 PM

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-16 12:22 PM

Noah Noah Noah.....What can I say!? Still your heart sits upon your page, as your spirit pens your hearts desires....Always a pleasure.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2003-02-16 06:48 AM

Noah, this was hard to read, not because of the sentiment expressed but because of the background and font colour, still I enjoyed the reading.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2003-02-16 07:53 AM

Noah, this poem made my day and it's only really just begun. Thank you!

*Hugs*

Sunkissed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-02-16 10:33 AM

The words of love.
Thank you,
Eric

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-02-16 11:46 AM

You seem to find just the right visuals to compliment your poetry Noah...good job!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-02-16 12:18 PM

Noah - what more can I say about the candy heart series, they are lovely...

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-02-16 02:03 PM

Noah, as all of your poems, this is beautiful....
as well as the graphics......

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Hey, Noah??
You mentioned the poem I posted on this forum (Open 25) as
good book submission material???
I understood Ron to say in the rules and everything
about the book, that it's best to not submit so
many poems at once...he said it would be best to submit
one a week??
And, he said that the automatic votes would be divided
among the submissions. So...I just don't think I'm
as good as a lot of the talented writers here, so
if I want to get a poem in the book, I'd better keep
my submissions down........Anyway, thank you for the
vote of confidence. I probably should have put the one
you said as my submission, since it's gotten much more
responses, and may have gotten more votes...
Thanks, buddy.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-16-2003 02:24 PM).]

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-02-16 02:24 PM

Thank you for sharing you poetry.. That poem hit me.. The color green around kinda turned me off though. =/

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Fauxreal
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 38

11 posted 2003-02-16 04:07 PM

Thank you so much for your warm welcome! It is really nice to see compliments and encouragement- Your work is beautiful!
It's like a whole different world - can't wait to read more.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2003-02-16 06:13 PM

Noah, please submit this for the book

Sandra

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2003-02-16 07:01 PM

nice

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2003-02-16 07:06 PM

I love it!
Margherita

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

15 posted 2003-02-16 07:12 PM

you always have these wonderful images - and I don't mean the pics. nice work!

btw, i found the yellow on green more than a bit hard to read. i actually pasted the text to notepad. ;-)

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2003-02-17 02:58 PM

I suppose this would be much ado about something...James

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