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a coming of age cinquain
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a coming of age cinquain |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Restraint emotions chained naive mind turns bouncer preventing eruption fiercely Grown-up |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its hard to bottle it up sometimes, when you want someone to feel your wrath, that deserves it. nice poem, peaceful and all [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-27-2003 06:49 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, Simple yet wise, defining maturity. I like this form, tho. haven't tried writing with it. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Kaile, you've written well of what it means to have self control and be grown up. Like the form, too. After walking through a highschool hall everyday, and even in interactions with many (alot) of adults I see that not many people are grown up. Glad you are Enjoyed. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice...I enjoy this style. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I can SEE it! One fist (the one that doesn't show) clenched, lips tight, eyes straight, holding it in..... Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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