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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-02-26 09:22 PM

The sun sets down its molten glow in lay upon the earth
As day succumbs in silent hour, to night’s triumphant birth
The settling of frictions planed by lightning strikes in sand
And watchfully a tapestry descends a twilight land

While there and then by sense append my heart in settle too
Unsaid in shred to last and lay the side of wanting true
In other words, for all its worth, the only need to ask
And tenderly the night lies down, beneath your smile in bask

Yet bright tomorrow should be known, a rise and shine indeed
In tickled wiggle, nervous giggle, as the morn is freed
Settlements of then and gone, an unrehearsed charade
And thankfully this part of me, upon the earth has laid

Copyright Kkh 2/26/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (02-26-2003 09:27 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-26 09:24 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-02-26 09:25 PM

all the intricate weavings of words, so
much your style, real nice

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-02-26 10:23 PM

See? I like this because I'm incapable of crafting my thoughts in so elegant a fashion.

Ed

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-02-27 12:13 PM

Yes, elegant, an understatement.
I love this. It reads very, very well. The rhyming and rhythm, seem perfect.
Concept, too.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-02-28 04:02 PM

Beautiful and lyrical.
Eric

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

6 posted 2003-02-28 05:14 PM

I love the way you write.

awesome.

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-02-28 05:50 PM

TD...you make me sigh with this ability of yours to do this so well, again and again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-02-28 06:00 PM

Exquisite Kathleen...much enjoyed the lyrical touch to this.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-02-28 06:49 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-02-28 08:03 PM

(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the night and day is tender and tomorrow you will see an ever more golden sun, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2003-02-28 08:13 PM

Thank you everyone for so many kind words, on all of my works. I learn from all of you, the best meanings of poetry. TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2003-02-28 08:23 PM

In tickled wiggle, nervous giggle, as the morn is freed
Settlements of then and gone, an unrehearsed charade

Loving this!!

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