Open Poetry #25 |
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Let The Children Play |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
NOTE: In some lands children can't even go out and play in fear of being shot or something else. So this is for them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Let the children play Without the fear of death Lingering at every opening Let the children play Let them have fun Without getting shot From a sniper who doesn't care if they live or die Let the children play Without the fear Of being raped Or beaten Or killed Let the children play Let them be free to roam Let them feel like they are safe From any harm Let children be children Don't make them grow up fast So they have to protect themselves From the injustices of this cruel world Just let the children play Without the fear of death Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I agree. The kids shouldn't have to be afraid to be kids. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
The opening verse, placed well at start and finish!! As an exclamation! Yes...... Let the children play Without the fear of death Lingering at every opening I loved this. It is heartfelt and true. Sad but true!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good! very good, nice thoughts |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loner, good sentiments here and well written to boot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and let freedom ring all over the world, nice pipedream, one day perhaps |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I also,cry for the children.Well said. Jason |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
It's really a sad reality.....Good honest write!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is so very sad but true, sweet friend, I too pray soon we can have confidence our children will be safe and again they can embrace the sun and the beauty of nature! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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