Open Poetry #25 |
I Dream of the Day |
Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
~I wrote this, of course, thinking about my hubby and I...but is it a little too much?Too, oh I don't know, mushy? ---- I dream of the day we'll be together The day we'll say "I do" I dream of the day we'll live together In a small house for two I dream of the day we'll move away To a small house for three I dream of the day that he will come Our first born will come to be I dream of the day we'll watch him walk Walk from the stage, diploma at hand I dream of the day we'll watch him grow To make his own promise land I dream of the day we're alone Our children grown and gone I dream of the day we can rest The day all we need to do is done Oh, I even dream of the day we've had enough And wish to say "good-bye" I dream of the day that we'll reflect On all the time that's gone by ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I dream that dream. Wondering if she will ever be, She of whom I write of In my poetry... Dragon misstress (love the name DRAGON)you amaze me with your writing! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Tanya, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too dream for all these special times with my future love wherever she is as I think all of us long for! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Mushy NO beautiful YES Dreams are what we live for each day So I say dream away Thomas aka: Rogue |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
since when is mushy bad? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dragon Mistress You dreamt of a lifetime. LOL enjoyed. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
FOLLOW YOUR DREAMS! INclan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this kind of mushy is good, I think |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Those are good dreams to have. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dragon Mistress, to dream is to dare and to dare is to do. Not mushy at all but beautiful dreaming. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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