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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-02-26 05:02 PM

Small Place, you say

but it is filled
with you
from corner
to corner
ceiling to floor
from wick
to flickering
night shadow
in secret laces
and blooms
of orchids
and when
it seems empty
there are dreams
spilling
out of baskets
or hidden
in special boxes
and still others
waiting
in your pen

©022503

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-26 05:09 PM

I enjoyed this immensely

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-02-26 06:01 PM

Krawdad...sounds like a pretty special person's place.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-26 06:04 PM

Oh my..I love every word of this.
I've read it over several times now..
Wonderful food for the senses.
Very much enjoyed by this reader.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-26 08:16 PM

(smiles) In every small place there is plenty of magic, some invisible but you can feel the muse speaking anyhow! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-02-26 08:17 PM

This is wonderful. Someone's 'space'...distictively theirs....
I love this! Quite sensitive to the aura one leaves among their possessions...

Enjoyed greatly, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2003-02-27 12:42 PM

beautiful...love this...h

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-02-27 12:50 PM

Brilliant write Krawdad haven't seen a post in awhile but then sadly haven't been reading as much as i'd like either

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

8 posted 2003-02-27 12:54 PM

Sounds real cozy and romantic to me. Enjoyed the poem very much.

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