Open Poetry #25 |
Reaching, Teaching, Leaching |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Reaching, Teaching, Leaching (2/26/03JDC) Your shadow Darkens what I can’t see Flower I am Or should be I stretch my stem Searching to surface From your stifling darkness Reaching for purpose Just when I think I might break free You say you are but a small shadow The rest is what I don’t see Blinking with confusion I wonder if it could be That what I seek freedom from Is simply me |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Sometimes we are our greatest obstacle and enemy. You must first find happiness within before you can share it with others so sayeth me and others I borrowed from |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with Brad...nice write here! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you. I am not as unhappy as my writing might suggest. Merely reflecting on how sometimes we lie to ourselves, devouring every word like a dehydrated alcoholic. Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes!!! Freedom is not in finding solace in others, driving a car, or being out on your own, but simply appreciating and cherishing yourself and loving yourself and only then are we never living a lie! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful discovery in your words, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...gives me thoughts concerning freedom and independence...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...much enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thats because we truly want to beleive so we block the obvious |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
these days we seem to seek out even shadows to blame enjoyed your perspective on that |
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