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If I Could But Dream
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If I Could But Dream |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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If I Could But Dream If I could dream I would dream of you Of sanctuary yet unseen A healing place with soothing views Perched above the morning frost A vista through the river bend Where lover’s hearts were lost And souls did mend Where I dreamt we’d sit And wonder why And how it is we fit Hoping one day to fly But it’s a peace I’ll never know Another golden fleece Upon crimson snow A waking vision just passing by One more fantasy captured in seam That I may yet live, perhaps even to fly If only one day I could but dream I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
But it’s a peace I’ll never know Another golden fleece Upon crimson snow Oh, "crimson snow", what an excellent phrase of contridiction. Susan |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful to read, this morning...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"One more fantasy captured in seam That I may yet live, perhaps even to fly If only one day I could but dream" hi Eagle1, this poem is realllllllly precious... The above highlighted from your poem tugs at the heartstrings... I very much enjoyed the readPoetFriend... Hugs2u... *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda reminds me of Robert Frost...good write there Eddie! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eddie, in your dreams you can be anything you want and you can go wherever you want and deep down, you already know how to fly, so spread those wings and soar, soar, soar!!! (big hugggssssss) Let the golden fleece enshroud you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I thank you poets, take care one and all! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely work... regards, sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi you. I've missed you, missed your poetry, missed lots  . Hugs to you Eddie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Another golden fleece Upon crimson snow beautiful last verse...I loved it all. M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eddie..the poem is lovely..the last verse exquisite! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words Eddie..good to see you here. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I thank you all for your kind words! Paula, I think I speak for all when I say good to see you around again and hope to see some of your work soon. Take care! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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