Open Poetry #25 |
Picture Book VII: Smoke |
majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Picture Book VII: Smoke A leaf resting, soft, It sleeps beside its mother Breath; a leaf aloft. Swirls of wind, away, Scentedn smoke from cedar fire's Flames; life to rest lay. Smoke rises high, surreal, Speckled halo through gaussian Blur; cycle unclear. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The first three lines made me smile; I particularly liked the leaf sleeping beside its mother... the whole of it? pleased me... Thank you majnu! |
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