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Open Poetry #25

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MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-25 08:48 PM

cracked and torn,
wondering what i did wrong.
What path did i take.
What mistake did i make.
Would anyone help
If i fell through
Or would they just sit
In the morning dew
Feeling as though nobody cares
Wondering if they would if i was theirs
You walked right in and picked me up
Untill the day u droped me in the mud
As fragile as i am
I am yet to be put back together again

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-03 06:24 AM

Sometimes, it seems it all happens at once. Nice read!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-04 05:42 AM

Miss - seems as though they just sit here in the morning dew . . . my thoughts exactly - like a puzzle - like a puzzle - very nice xxoo

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

3 posted 2003-03-04 06:09 AM

keep up the good writes
>>phantom poet<<

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