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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-02-25 08:12 PM

Handle With Care
~ By Sue ~

If I open up my heart to you
Would you break it too
If I gave you all I have inside
Would you take it all with pride

I would love you everyday
And my love would always stay
I would hold you inside my heart
And from you I would never part

To you I give unconditionally
Of all I have inside of me
Whenever I am there with you
You have my heart there too

So handle it with so much care
And with you my love I will share
2-25-03

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

1 posted 2003-02-25 08:27 PM

This is a very beautiful, heartfelt sonnet. Great writing!

~Streen

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-02-25 08:36 PM

Sue - you have so much love to give.....you will receive it as well when the time is right. Lovely piece. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-26 03:03 AM

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2003-02-26 10:58 AM

Sue, your heart is bursting with love ... it will be loved again one day.

Hugs, Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.
Shirley MacLaine

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-02-26 11:03 AM

SmartChick
Don't get much better then that. Good write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-02-26 11:24 AM

I feel like giving you a great, big, loving hug! You are so sweet, gentle, and caring!
You are like a vessel of love that is always giving--the time will come when your stores will be repleted.

~ As the saying goes, "This is the first day of the rest of your life"---so go out there and make it a good one, Sweet Sue!

Linda

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-02-26 12:05 PM

"To you I give unconditionally
Of all I have inside of me"

what a world it would be! beautiful!

Rf

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-02-26 02:26 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I agree 100% with Linda, you truly are an angelic and loving and caring soul and always make everyone feel good about themselves and sympathize so very well, and as long as you embrace this first day of the rest of your life, you will find this love that will always carry your heart with fondling care! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-02-26 02:32 PM

Hi Sue!!
My what a beautiful sonnet this is!
One day I'm going to learn how to rhyme like this!
Wonderful...and please smile and take care!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-02-26 07:01 PM

love your poetry

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

11 posted 2003-02-26 07:59 PM

Ahhh a warning before hand! I loved it!

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