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Deathtrap |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Conformity's an old cuss pitching forth from a scratchy throat. A pawing fawn about to walk on its own four letters born minutes ago in the black corners filled with gobs of cobwebs. Running along the mind of spiders and frightened flies neglected grand ecliptic jagged jaded naiveté- a scene of sensibility. Or maybe it was to me, in the corner, sitting under the buzzing lamplight interrogating my own blanket of blankness of witness-words like good cop bad. Just to be contrary I’m spinning a story about the pitfalls of love. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (03-01-2003 10:20 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's a nasty pitfall and you tell it well. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
screwy but intersting poem. i'll be mulling this one over for a while. -majnu |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this Walt.... good to see you on the pages... |
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