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Open Poetry #25

Plaster’s Seal

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-25 02:00 PM

Plaster’s Seal

it is
a small place
of my existence
twenty walls
short, narrow
wide and long
slipping into
them now
seems so right

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

1 posted 2003-02-25 02:26 PM

Helen,

I like the fact that I get the feeling of an old house--when reading this. The disappearing almost seems as if one is going to immerse themselves in memory--as there would be in an old, and well lived-in home.

Thank you for sharing this,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-02-25 03:09 PM

you write with ache....or so it seems..

as always.I am both impressed and amazed

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