Open Poetry #25 |
Haiku |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Necks swan in slight reach Tulips bleeding touch of red Heart of palm shall feed |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ha! I hope to be the first to respond. I so enjoy the Japanese forms. Thank you for sharing your creation with us. INclan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... I enjoyed. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
well done! Rf |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
I adore haiku..... this one is beautiful.... the visuals are a definite RED..lovely! Golden* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Deca! So good to see you here! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello Deca! This is lovely....simply lovely. Swans were in flight over our river a week ago..which is odd for this time of year. hugs to you, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very very nice... regards, sudhir |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful. I really do love these. Hugs, Ethel |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
It's great. Beautiful imagery |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is wonderfully rich imagery, sweet friend, here's hoping the pain will subside soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Decaflame, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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