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Open Poetry #25

Don't Make Me

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-02-25 11:57 AM

I don't want to cry
not the way whales do
calling to a mate that
never comes
covered in darkness
at that bottom of ocean's
lonely

I don't want to cry
not the way clowns do
painting smiles over upside
down hearts
juggling pain for
the amusement while
torn apart

I don't want to cry
not the way you do
locked inside, key
thrown away
heart over grown
with weed, decay
none allowed in
no reaching out
unwilling to accept
what love's about

I don't want to cry

without you..

sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-25 12:00 PM

Sunkissed
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2003-02-25 12:04 PM

Thank you, Seymour.

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2003-02-25 12:13 PM

Things are rough, then?

A good write...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-02-25 12:15 PM

it speaks very well to such feelings...

very nicely done...

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2003-02-25 12:21 PM

Not rough Deca, a little melancholy.
Thanks for reading.

Thanks Captain, kind of you to say.

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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