Open Poetry #25 |
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Whisper............Cinquan? |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
Sensual sound Spoken very softly Cause passionate feelings to stir Heart Voice . . . . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! More than Right... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very well done,Ethel.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
..............psssst .....this is sweet......a tasty cinquain.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Karilea!!!! I just noticed that Bridgette had posted one, too. I hope Nan sees them. ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Scorpio. That was fun to write. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Ed. I'm glad that you think so. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ah...yes!!! ME LIKES!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great work! This is beautiful. Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eythel, Congratulations on doing such a fine job. Glad to see you branching out a little. Plus! It is beautiful. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is excellent, sweet friend, the form is perfect, I am so happy to see you trying these too, yay, you are just amazing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well Ethel, I think you did this very good. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bridgette, Thank you!! I like yours, too... ![]() . . Eric, thank you very much...... ![]() . . Pat, Thank you , sweetie. It was fun to try. ![]() . . Heart Hugs to you all, ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, there you go... saying just the right thing again... ![]() . . Sue, thank you very much, friend. I tried to do it right..... ![]() . . Heart Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ethel, you have the ciquain form down prefectly, and how beautifully you express it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice ethel, nice choice of poetry, both content and context |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is softly beautiful, gg... well done! *S* |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, Thank you for your sweet reply... ![]() . . Michele, I appreciate you nice words.... ![]() . . Suthern, Thank you. I appreciate your sweet reply. ![]() . . Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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