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garysgirl

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0 posted 2003-02-24 02:56 PM

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In the still of night
Whispers from a gentle breeze
Always sound clearly
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-24 02:59 PM

Ethel...

smiling here....

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

2 posted 2003-02-24 03:00 PM

Yes they do, Ethel...night breezes whisper to me the name of my love...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-02-24 03:08 PM

Ethel - much enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
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4 posted 2003-02-24 11:20 PM

(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous poems do, whether they are longer or shorter! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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5 posted 2003-02-24 11:27 PM

A message whispered
To the evening's passing breeze;
Will my love hear it?

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2003-02-25 01:23 AM

Ethel,
indeed and those whispers are always welcome...

applauding the new direction you are taking in your work..write more Jap stuff!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-25 01:30 AM

Thank you, Kaile. I really enjoy writing
these little poems. They're so much fun!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-02-25 04:12 AM

beautiful

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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9 posted 2003-02-25 10:57 PM

softly they whisper
delicate crystalline lace
late winter snow flakes

INclan

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-02-25 11:01 PM

Such a pretty post Ethel. Enjoyed this.
TD

Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
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11 posted 2003-02-25 11:07 PM

Oh Ethel,

I'm so glad you posted this senryu, as I had been talking about it with a friend the other day.

I think this is quite lovely--and just floats there... like the lightest/happiest thought. I almost can reach out--and touch it.

Love the formatting and the font, that adds so much to it's intimaticy.

Thank you for this,

--Matt

(heh, I've added this one to my library.)

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-02-26 12:37 PM

It's lovely Ethel but right now the breeze is -26 celsius over hear plus windchill it's probably below -30!!

lucky
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13 posted 2003-02-27 02:43 PM

spells it very clear have you ever thought of joining a haiku/senryu club or site..? Drop me a line if your interested.

lucky

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2003-02-27 04:10 PM

My heart hears your words on an entirerly new level! Thank you.
Eric

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-02-28 12:30 PM

Karilea,
I'm so glad that it made you smile

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Scorpio,
yeah, they whisper my Love's name to me, too..

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Chris,
I'm really glad that you enjoyed.....

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.Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2003-02-28 12:34 PM

Noah,
thank you very much, sweet friend...

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Ed,
I really love your poem'reply...

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Kaile,
thank you again....

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Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-28-2003 12:34 AM).]

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

17 posted 2003-02-28 12:38 PM

Dixie,
I'm really glad that you liked....

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INclan,
thank you very much for the poem-reply......

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Kathleen,
thank you, sweet Lady...

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Heart Hgs, ya'll
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

18 posted 2003-02-28 12:44 PM

Minister Joe,
Thank you for the compliments and for putting
it in your library.....

Raph,
BBRRRRR, now that was cold!!!!!
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Lucky,
thanks so much for liking the poem. No, I've never thought of it, really. I haven't been writing these for very long. I really do like to try, don't you?
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Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

vandana

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19 posted 2003-02-28 06:56 PM

enjoyed

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

20 posted 2003-02-28 08:53 PM

Vandana, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it....

Hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

21 posted 2003-03-01 01:00 AM

...indeed, they do.

Lovely...

Warm nighttime hugs,
Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

22 posted 2003-03-01 05:16 AM

These few words are charming.
And inspiring.
Margherita

garysgirl

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23 posted 2003-03-01 12:03 PM

Thanks, Linda. I hope you had a good night's sleep....

Hugs,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

24 posted 2003-03-01 12:04 PM

Thank you Margherita,
You are so sweet...

Hugs,
Ethel

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