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Mood Colors |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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This is something I wrote a very long time ago about a marriage that has since ended. "Mood Colors" Red for the blood I cry Blue for the untouchable sky Purple for the bruises I carry Black for the hurt I bury Green for the grass that’s cut Orange for the doors I shut Yellow for the sun that goes down Gray when your around Red for the sign to stop Blue at the very top Purple at a rainbows core Black for despair no more Green for the trees that grow Orange for not feeling low Yellow for the man I marry Gray for depression I parry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Wel done, an interesting read. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Gray for depression I parry. it is always parry and thrust... always. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sy, Thank you. I wrote it about 10 yrs ago so I don't remember the meaning behind a couple of the lines. But I remember the feeling of hopelessness behind the write in its entirety. Susan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Cpat, Took me an additional ten years to thrust. I am a slow learner! Susan |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Susan, This is an interesting write. Glad you are no longer in that situation. It captured much of an abusive relationship. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Pat, Thank you for the response. Please note the purple for the bruises are emotional rather than physical. Susan |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
I really liked thsi piece! The way you put it together was very well done. |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
don't get lost |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I really loved this! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Susan... and am so glad your mood is colored more brightly these days. *S* |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
All who know me know I love this piece.Honesty and real pain.I can tell from this read that real love will belong to you soon. Jason |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Good! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Susan The images portrayed through your words were very vivid. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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