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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-23 04:05 PM

And the first breath of dawn
holds a taste of the parting
Night -

I wake to lingering dreams.

Breathing in the two worlds.

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

1 posted 2003-02-23 04:07 PM

Ericc,

It is that transition from the dream into the waking world--that sometimes lingers with us--when strong feelings are associated with those dreams. That was very vivid--in this almost, haiku-like piece.

Thank you so much for sharing,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-02-23 04:08 PM

Oh, I do so know what you mean...and you expressed it so well.

Lovely write.

~ May all your dreams put a smile on your face...

Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-23 04:33 PM

(sigh) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too know this feeling when the rooster crows and I wake up, I am saddened my dreams didn't come true but I feel the peace inside me ever at that moment on! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-02-23 04:35 PM

Pure and precise...have known this feeling of two worlds. Well done. TD

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-02-23 04:43 PM

let me
breathe
your day
leaving
my nights
breathless

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-23 05:06 PM

How magic... ethereal... haunting... beautiful.

What wonderful magic you weave with your words.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-02-23 06:40 PM

Very beautiful Eric..much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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