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A Rogues Night time thoughts
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A Rogues Night time thoughts |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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She is a dream that comes to me in the night slow and sexy in my thoughts our eyes lock in an embrace her voice plays to my ears as I reach to get a touch I find a tear on my cheek that awakens me from my sleep |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Thomas, Carrying the tangible aspects of that dream--those very strong feelings associated with on we love, but is not here--was all very beautifully put here in your poem. Sometimes--it does feel so real. Thank you for sharing this, --Matt Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ May all your pleasant dreams become your reality. Warm hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is a beautiful heartfelt poem, sweet friend, and may the tears soon become gold reflecting loves joy! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you I have missed this time of writing with all of you and I am enjoying my return I promise I will never leave home |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well it is good you are back and this was indeed a beautiful poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this place is great, isn't it? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sweet dreams thomas...h |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
beautiful dream, beautifully done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Learninginlife New Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 9Mississippi |
I am amazed the first poem of yours I read was so sad and this one is just wow can't even express it |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Thomas..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice imagery...I felt that salty teardrop |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank all of you for your comments. I enjoy reading them and your poems |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, fantasy can be so much sweeter than reality... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely write Thomas, simply lovely. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thomas this well constructed with a dreamy surrealism until reality butts in. Very nice! (P.S. Thanks for your comments, also) david Every Day's a Blessing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - this is just lovely - longing and lovely - beautiful job xxoo as I reach to get a touch I find a tear on my cheek that awakens me from my sleep |
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