Open Poetry #25 |
A Treasure |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She found herself a treasure when she found him Not believing anymore in fairy tales or fantasies She had a difficult time in the belief of For she found herself a treasure when she found him Their love was like a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow She found an everlasting love when she found him Their love seemed to be a fairytale in a mystical fantasyland of love magically of passion Yes, she found herself a treasure when she fell in love with him ********** |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem is a treasure! So sweet, tender and endearing... Warm hugs to you this snowy night (at least it is here in Ontario!) Linda P.S. Ethel, you may enjoy reading my poem "Twin Souls" in Reflections. As I was posting it, I was thinking how much that you and Gary could identify with it. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-22-2003 11:30 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always have that pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, your loves heart, close to your heart, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, you are the proud recipient of my 22,500th post, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Linda. It's not snowing here, but it's cold..... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Noah....and YEA 22,500 POSTS What an accomplishment that is, friend. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Julie, That's sweet. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Okay, Linda....I'll go there now. I haven't been on here until awhile ago, since yesterday. I'm going now.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, to find true love is indeed a treasure. And, I am glad you have found such a treasure. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Ethel - this poem is a Well done. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Just priceless, how you are able to continually describe your love with Gary. This is a treasure, indeed. Hugs and love, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ethel..this is so beautiful... and love itself is a treasure. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice poem. Enjoyed the read.. Very nicly written. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
I have translated the poem into Chinese here. If you agree, I will post it to some web sites in Chinese, such as: http://www.toppoem.com/list.asp?boardid=15 http://www.likk.com/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=34 http://www.poemlife.com.cn/forum/list.jsp?forumID=6 http://www.liufangdi.com/index_2.asp http://www2.bbsland.com/cgi-bin/tea.cgi Thank you for your good poem. Õ䱦 µ±Ëý·¢ÏÖÁËËû Ëý·¢ÏÖÁË×Ô¼ºÕâ¿éÕ䱦 ²»ÔÙÏàÐÅÈκΠͯ»°»ò »ÃÏë ËýµÄÐÅÑöÓÐÁË À§ÈÅ ÒòΪµ±Ëý·¢ÏÖÁËËû Ëý·¢ÏÖÁË×Ô¼ºÕâ¿éÕ䱦 ËûÃǵİ®¾ÍÏó ²ÊºçÄ©¶ËµÄ Ò»¹Þ½ð×Ó µ±Ëý·¢ÏÖÁËËû Ëý·¢ÏÖÁËÓÀºãµÄ°® ËûÃǵİ®ºÃËÆͯ»°°ã ÉñÃØÃÀÃî °®µÄÃξ³ ¼¤Çé ħÉÕ ÊǵÄ,µ±Ëý°®ÉÏÁËËû Ëý·¢ÏÖÁË×Ô¼º Õâ¿éÕ䱦 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those treasures are rare... and priceless. *S* And this is beautiful. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thank you for the big smile... . . Chris, I'm so glad that you think it's a treasure.... . . Pat, Thank you for your sweet reply, friend....... . . Heart hugs to you all, Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you do indeed seem to have found a treasure. nicely done. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goldboat, that will be very good. Thank you for wanting others to see my poem..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, Love is a treasure, isn't it? . . Connel, thank you. I'm glad that you like it. . . Suthern Lady, yes, love is priceless, isn't it? . . Capt. Ron, Thank you. We certainly do think we have found a treasure in our love. . . Hugs to all, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 05:37 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I never cease to be amazed at how fearlessly you put your heart on the line. Such lovely thoughts you express. Nice job. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Love is often the stuff of dreams and fairytales. Am glad yours came true. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken, thank you for your reply. You know, I guess it's just that I'm so confident that my Love won't hurt me the way I've been hurt in the past. I believe he loves me so much that I would trust him with my life. Hugs from Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much Michael. I appreciate your replies. They are always so sweet.... Heart Hugs, Ethel..... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goldboat, I forgot to tell you to be sure to use my name and my copyright if you post my poem on the other sight. I would greatly appreciate it if you would do that. Thank you, Ethel |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Yes,I do! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, this is so beautiful. You write alot of things that bring back memories. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goldboat, THANKS!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I'm really glad that you like it. I hope that my poems bring back some good memories to you... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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