Open Poetry #25 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Times Winds blew over time Soft dresses covered all then Iron clad worked jeans Beans to table corn bread warm Still the water came to us New sounds of sleek whoosh Star wars model replace aged Sands of time still grind Powers ours ~ behold the wind Lessons go ~ misunderstood |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--The power of the wind remains the same...everything else changes. Loved the thought in this. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this one. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
if we could appreciate the power of these 'natural' elements more...thanks Karilea |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
progress cold and true |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ecrivan...that we could... Aenimal....we we should! Thanks...to all that read... we could gather so much, but for the red tape [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-22-2003 11:07 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a superb contrast. great post. -majnu |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice job :-) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this is lovely! Cor |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... |
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