Open Poetry #25 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Times ![]() Winds blew over time Soft dresses covered all then Iron clad worked jeans Beans to table corn bread warm Still the water came to us ![]() New sounds of sleek whoosh Star wars model replace aged Sands of time still grind Powers ours ~ behold the wind Lessons go ~ misunderstood |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--The power of the wind remains the same...everything else changes. Loved the thought in this. ![]() |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this one. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
if we could appreciate the power of these 'natural' elements more...thanks Karilea ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
progress cold and true |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ecrivan...that we could... Aenimal....we we should! Thanks...to all that read... we could gather so much, but for the red tape [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-22-2003 11:07 PM).] |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a superb contrast. great post. -majnu |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice job :-) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this is lovely! Cor |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... |
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