Open Poetry #25 |
Missing You |
Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Sitting on the ledge, Staring out at the view. Eyes close...Reflect...Smile. You're there as always, Missing you so bad, Can hardly live. Cool air blowing on face, Won't be long, Your arms, My body, Smiling. Missing you so bad, But remembering when We last touched. So sweet, We cried, Then smiled. Missing you so bad, I'm going crazy, It's so hard, It's been the longest wait, Such a long half hour. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Albert, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I think I would already miss my love the minute she went out the door to go to work! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is very sweet Albert. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Chris and Noah!!!!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and when passion strikes the clock's hour strikes even harder...nice write Albert |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Merci ecrivan!! I am glad you enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cute ending! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Earth Angel! Glad you enjoyed! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
tick,tock,tick,tock, water drippping thru the faucet, drop by drop, dali said it best |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin... TD |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Goddess and Diamond!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write! enjoyed! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you passing shadows~~~~~~~ |
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