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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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In between in between is there such a place? moving at pace wandering through gardens of the sky never fading with daylight nor drowning in dark misty with mystery collecting rain tears casting a shadow of shelter yet fear blanketing our expectations sea of cloud existing in sky melting down as our sun takes the prize weathering our delusional breakdowns measuring miles in unmeasurable life. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I think there is definitely an in between of in between and you have painted the cracks of time to perfection. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I think there exists sucha place, after all aren't we in-between between another universe? (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, your words are always delightful to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful words written here Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop A good write and a good read. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Very beautiful. I enjoyed the read!!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is great! Eric |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very much enjoyed. Great thoughts. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed the search for the in between and take that to be an interlude on the screen of life  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! I really liked this one! |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
What was once lost ... has again been found. |
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