Open Poetry #25 |
My Love |
That Playa TL Junior Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 19Tampa, FL |
"My Love" I give to you and you give to me we are the example of what true love should be we've been together for 16 months and still going strong when we're so much alike, how could we go wrong? I give you kisses on your neck and lower body I get high when i see you in those low cut shorts, lord have mercy I smell Versace perfume and it reminds me of you cuz the essence of your love is rich and unbreakable, i love you my love, my love, my love you are the love of my life (my love) you make everything right (my love) i goto sleep with you by my side each and every night (my love) (repeat) we'll always be together, its not even a question you were sent to me from up above as a blessin' when i feel down and depressed, you're right there helping me cope with my problems, helping me solve em, desolve em, u make them disappear you're the only thing on my mind, thinking about the hot sex and the love that we share nothing less do i ever expect i look into the future and see us being family and having kids (chorus 2x) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Passion with a future perspective ... Must be real Love, as your heart says .. Margherita |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This full of passion and I like that. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Fauxreal Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 38 |
Oh (sigh) the new exciting innocence of new love. Full of such kindness, and hope. It's like a breath of fresh air for those of us in a "comfortable" relationship- like a pair of worn in old sweatpants- this poem is like a new pair of jeans that make u feel good |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just love your beautiful songs here, I would love to hear them put to music and you can sing these to your love and she is destined to swoon! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There's nothing like a love song to lift the heart. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful to read! |
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That Playa TL Junior Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 19Tampa, FL |
Thanks alot to those who replied |
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