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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-21 10:04 PM

And the muse
Cries
Silence
To the stars -
I listen...as the tears fall for
every word that echoes
Unspoken through
The night.

I gather each tear...and fill an empty page.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

1 posted 2003-02-21 10:13 PM

wow.............

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-21 10:15 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Eric, this is so very touching, sweet friend, may these tears be spoken out one by one and your heart be revealed to us all! (sigh) You always write with such sincerity, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

3 posted 2003-02-21 10:20 PM

good job

andrea

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2003-02-21 10:42 PM

This is great!

enjoyed

Maree

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-21 11:19 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-02-22 06:08 AM

And the page reflects deep emotion.
So beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-02-22 07:01 AM

a star shower....

Ericc...your muse is lovely....

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2003-02-22 10:03 AM

WOW indeed!! This is beautiful!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

9 posted 2003-02-22 11:11 AM

And you, the perfect Listener, to gather such silence and make the sweetest music from its depths...

You are amazing.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-02-22 09:17 PM

marry me??? lol, another soul filled inspirational write ericc, i'm liking your style.
lots of love , gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-02-27 03:08 PM

Very nice...something that is done each time a writer takes up pen or keyboard...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2003-02-27 03:26 PM

Ericc - this is wonderful....a

love it!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-02-27 06:34 PM

Eric, I have a few spare tears, do you have any empty pages you need to fill?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-02-27 07:43 PM

nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-02-28 04:45 AM

short but powerful!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

16 posted 2003-02-28 08:34 AM

I have plenty of tears to fill your pages. This is a wonderful poem.

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