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Enlighten Yourself...
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Enlighten Yourself... |
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Shimlu Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 11 |
Peering from within, I look with an eagle's eye To find that I need to engulf more of this More fresh air, I need more... I move through this forest Without my feet touching the ground Vividly the colors dispense in front of me Figuring I should, I swiftly move up the tree High above the forest now, I slowly close my eyes Twisting the colors with my mind Opening them I'm shown an island My sense's are alive Flowing through the air I now can control everything I'm my own god now Looking down now from the sky, Whales move in that blue water Symphonies move into the air Moving me so... Heavenly sounds engulf my ears Suddenly I find myself Chanting comes from inside that temple Enlightened |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Very good imagery! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I was there! great imagery! |
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