Open Poetry #25 |
Phobic |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Phobic the taste of fear grows stronger than the courage needed to overcome it the feel of anxiety eases into each morning the edginess agitating my desires the field of vision limited, perception distorted, the gray shadowing happiness today, I am a ghost of myself, stalking the mirrored image, seeking the voice of reason M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
break the mirror, leave yourself behind, for a while , at least, good portrayal of mindstate as is |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I think that fear can dwarf every other sensation, when the source is imminent. This is a nice comment on an emotion we all have. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
This was a great piece. I want to save it to read later!! Into the library with ya! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...great imagery! Eric |
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