Open Poetry #25 |
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Touching upon silence |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity ![]() |
Waves of silence We ascend among particles of Love of blue and gold, drawn like magnets to heights untold. You and me drops of water, sprinkled into the night sky by jets born in the sea. Our smiles sparkles of light, touching in awe, releasing love to lonely hearts. Our souls embracing on waves of silence, twirling spheres, sharing whispers of pure delight. You and me dancing stars, pointing to distant pools of treasures, on the paths of eternity. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beautiful picture you paint of sea and sky and love |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
softly, sweetly romantic Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - I like your soft prose... BC |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
"We ascend among particles of Love of blue and gold, drawn like magnets to heights untold." MMM gives me the warm fuzzies thinking about that. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Margherita, this is lovely, sweet friend, such beautiful peace and comfort fills these gorgeous words, yay, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Your splendid words are always like a big warm hug, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your heart knows the story of love so well...and you share it so beautifuly. Love, Eric |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Margherita, this is beautiful... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Your words must sing to his heart, such sweet melodies!! "Our souls embracing on waves of silence, twirling spheres, sharing whispers of pure delight." AWESOME |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
Awww. As everyone said, it's simply "lovely". ~*~Courage is wings~*~ |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
romantic poem about you and a loved one in silence. how intimate and romantic. |
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