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Open Poetry #25

Welcome to hell my darling

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

0 posted 2003-02-21 03:18 PM

Can you feel?
does the pain
make you blink?
if I poke you like this
will you
scream
at me some vulgar thing
or will you laugh it off
as if nothing
as the knives of darkness
rip your soul

Smile for the camera
pretty dear
show those pouty lips
its only just begun
your decent into hell
nonstop flight

listen
quietly
and you'll
hear the hounds
howling
for your flesh
yet you pretend
its only a dream
sadly true
but longer
eternity you see

I want to undestand
crawl beneath
your painted skin
to see a person crying
underneath

I want to violate
your mind
rape your intellect
from the inside out

dear
you wonder who I am
or do you even care
i am the ingnorrance
you hide
behind your eyes
when no one else is around

I am the skeletons in your closet
your every waking fear
wear your sexy best
for misery is here
I'll take you to the sexual thros
of angony and pain
and leave but a empty shell
to serve me another night
again..

so Smile pretty blonde hair dear
for the camera please
let have your name
ah ms naiive mediocrity
now thats a name
mine is misery
and you my dear
are my little game.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-02-21 03:23 PM

Okay, maybe I don't want to war with you.....

Scary, deep piece.

Susan

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

2 posted 2003-02-21 03:50 PM

thank you think I scared every one else off

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

3 posted 2003-02-21 05:49 PM

Wow... quite dark. Connecting with your shadows and bringing them into the light... the pain and anger are strong and well-illustrated.

Intriguing write.

Moca

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-02-22 03:27 PM

They say that a women can really like or dislike a guy...not sure if thats what this is about...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-02-22 04:02 PM

Darksoul,
Very dark spidery sort of work. Chilling and yet realistic.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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