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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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i sat on weathered rocks, yelling in the dark spitting into the wind, tossing sins of shame, sitting silent in a forest scene, becoming one with trees breathing in , breathing out, rolled in mud, sank in sand, chanted motionless at the sun, bled life on typed pages of white, took a needle or two underskin decorated in eternal memory, swam to seclusion sheltered safely on my throne of rock, walking this midnight walk, the moon at my shoulder my shadow beneath, this truth for the moment, clear in sight, born alone,die alone, this is sadly, but poignantly, just our own solo flight |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I used to feel that way myself, seems like one hundred years ago, now. Can relate and think you brought the idea and feeling across quite well in this. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Good write, I liked. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We all pass the time differently, maybe your way is as good as any. Enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
can only relate to about half of this...but it got my attention. M |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes the silence can show us the best view ... looking terrific from here!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great writing as usual |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
 Your name is fitting inkedgoddess!! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Spitting into the wind gets you wet, becoming one of the tree get you mossy, sitting silent in the forest makes you subject to predators, getting tatoo's are ok for you, not me walking is good but not at midnight, too many creeps out there, you are not born alone, your mommy was there too, otherwise this was a terrific read. As always, you are the best!!!! |
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