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Open Poetry #25

Casting into the Wind

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-15 12:05 PM

Cast to the wind, caught in it’s spin,
Swirls once again, torn from within;
Rips from my being, paper I’m seeing
Floating on the winter’s wind breathing
Emotions lost to loves seething.
Look to the sky, bits floating by
Drift down from high, sad passerby
Tears that are crying, little bits dying
Casting into wind and lost in flying
Devotions whispered was but lying.
Scattered they flew, winds blowing through
Carries off the words written of you.
Swirls once again, torn from within,
Cast to the wind, caught in it’s spin.

Gloom
TF1

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-02-15 12:20 PM

".... carries off the words written of you ...."
sad feelings expressed beautifully.
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-02-15 12:27 PM

whew! I could picture a windy city, New York or Chicago, and swirling winds carrying away what you've ripped off and thrown out the window of a high rise apartment building.

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-15-2003 12:28 PM).]

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

3 posted 2003-02-15 02:54 PM

So sad, but i enjoyed it alot.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-02-18 08:00 AM

Loved this!

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