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Open Poetry #25

On Deaths Door

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-21 11:08 AM

I am on deaths door
But I am ready to go
I have suffered enough
In the pitiful condition
That I am in

I am on deaths door
But I know
That one day
I shall see all my loved ones
Once more

I am on deaths door
But my loved ones
Will be as happy as I am
That I won't be suffering anymore
And I will be at peace
When my life here on earth is done

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-21 11:11 AM

Julie, your grandmother will be in my prayers.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-21 11:12 AM

Pat,
The subject sad but the write is good.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-02-21 11:20 AM

Julie, are you writing this through the eyes of your grandmother? This was very moving and I am sending prayers for your grandmother--and for you, Dear One.

  For everything
  There is a season
  A perfect rhyme
  A perfect reason

Be well hugs to both you and your grandmother,

EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-21-2003 02:28 PM).]

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2003-02-21 12:16 PM

I wish I were a healer so I could change things, but we mages know only the spells of offense.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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5 posted 2003-02-21 12:23 PM

Sometimes things are sad and good. It's true of life, and it's true of this poem.....thanks for sharing it.

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