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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-02-20 05:59 PM

Ripples floated by
in natures hypnotic trance.
Rocks speaking calmly
from rapid succession,
gurgling in a mind melt
of divine reflections.

In a meditative hiatus
of isolated tranquility,
you are truly blessed
within your own identity.
To sigh within the spirit
dancing free of hostility.

Laying on a carpet
of God’s lovely treasures.
You are blanketed
in a melody of angelic
inner inspirations.
Needing no man to please.
Freeing the souls burden.

From past needs to please others,
savage blows keep hammering
you into a corner of submission.
Submissive aura of suffocated slavery
in which your opinions
were no longer desired.
You escaped realties stagnation.

In the landscape of your imagination,
the heavens showered you in gems,
sparkling from within special miracles
of you own unique creation.
So dynamically, positively brilliant,
your exuberance is buoyed
from endless depression.

Sounds so diverse, now whisper into you.
Tones of colors, tan into your existence,
melting ambivalent indifference.
In a portrait of living purpose,
not giving a DAM, a chance
to hold back such negative feelings.
For your stream must flow
from the beauty
blossoming within.

(So okay, I punctuated this one! But the thoughts are the same!)
D.Lester Young 2/20/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-20 06:15 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh David, this is so very true, sweet friend, if we can make the laft ride down the heart of our imagination, where possibilities are endless and taste the colors you create rather than down the oily rivers of reality, we can find solace and peace and we can appreciate ourselves so much more we can give ourselves hugs! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is marvelous, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-20 06:16 PM

This is worthy of being in the book. It gets my vote. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-02-20 09:25 PM

this is so rich with flavour, texture and tone.
like a walk in a jungle- an odd way to describe a poem, but hey, its the way it made me feel.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl