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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Desert wind flips and rolls like train... of thought irrational brief hauntings invade and strike gold bribing my mind to meet with you weakened soft bones raising alarm of alien desert ahead its all the same but no one tells me echo does the grief and melting re mould and glue with useless care it never existed why do you pry? shake the hand of worry offer a seat the company evokes images black inconsistant ventures to unseen still i give with each curious gaping wound to what isnt mine. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is extremely well written. It stirs up so many emotions for me. Thank you I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Gemma I love your writing but if i may be so bold, i find this to be your best yet. fantastic |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, this is really good. You really are a good writer, friend.....  Hugs, Ethel Mae  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
julie, thankyou for your ever supportive replies.  koko, Thankyou so much, my pleasure. yep it contains stuff i never knew about myself and the world before, scary, but exploring self further i suppose. Raph, i'm taken back by your comment. and i'm gracuious for sucha compliment. the poem was scary to write, a whole world off stuff recently opened up infront of my eyes, nightmarish. so thanks, it really means a lot. Ethel Mae, you too yanno sweetheart? thankyou too for the huge compliment. your replies mean so much friend. thanks for reading my muddled thoughts. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one of your best, I think! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gemma, Though I am not that familiar with your past poetry to offer an opinion, in this one, I really like the first six lines, especially. Writing is a wonderful way of self-examination and sharing it sparks memories or feelings for the reader. Thanks for this, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Wonderfully written! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I am a first time reader of your writes and I am hooked your talent for poetry is wonderful I think I will read more Thomas |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
everyone, thankyou again for your wonderful replies, thomas119gold, wow, what a compliment, i'm speechless and undeserving,but thankyou very much. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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