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Angel Rain
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Angel Rain |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
A saddened brow Dips to touch the sky And rains a bitter tear From a soft and painful eye |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
It's a nice image, the idea of rain coming from the servants of heaven, good effort |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you just had to know that an "angel" would have to read a poem with this title! Mind you, I am of the earthy variety!--but none the less, I can appreciate the poignancy of this write. Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...amen! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like the title, which drew me in, and the poem as well. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Bob... so much with so few... well done Sir... |
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