Open Poetry #25 |
Encounter Within |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
With a snarl, the monster reared its ugly head. The hero looked up at the beast's eyes, so red. Once again, like a dragon the creature roared, But the fearless hero unsheathed his sword. A few quick swipes and this fight had come to an end. The hero's will was far too strong to bend. But then the monster rose again; The hero knew the beast was in pain. "Just one more swipe should slay this beast! One tiny slice will make it a feast." The creature struck with claws of steel. "Oh, what pain this warrior feels!" The hero fell, the end now real. But what's this? Somehow the hero is healed! Looking up he saw the one who had saved his life. The creature attacked, but the hero drew his knife. Soon enough the beast was slain, And the hero met the healer who had taken away his pain. With each day, the hero grows stronger; He gains more courage and stays a bit longer. All that came from the Angel of Love, The one who healed him after coming from above. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This defiently deserves to be in the book. This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Nowhere near as beautiful as you Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Liam, this is lovely, sweet friend, love can make anything possible and with it, you are always the fortunate one and stand proud as the hero, yay, this is wonderful, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Great poem, I enjoyed it very much. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem... Hugs, Ethel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice..... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
I enjoy it when the dragon wins... but great write. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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