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Underneath Velvet Skies
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Underneath Velvet Skies |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Underneath Velvet Skies we look up to the bright stars sparkling as clear as diamonds We gaze up at them as we lie on the grass on top of our soft blanket The night is very peaceful as we listen quietly to the music from the radio playing very softly Ocassionally we hear the fish jumping in the water, or a cricket by the river Then our song comes on the radio wih the words flowing through and we again whisper in each other's ear "Do you know that I love you as much as the whole world and back around again" We get up and sway to the music slowly dancing under the stars in the moonlit night by the beautiful river [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 09:35 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We get up and sway to the music slowly dancing under the stars in the moonlit night by the beautiful river ==================================== such romantic images ... lovely Ethl love that cursive font  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very pretty write,made me wish that I was there with my wife. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Lovely! What an intimate scene... Rf |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Thank you for inviting us all to share this most intmate moment of love and beauty. Your words transported me. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not meaning any disrespect, but I read your stuff, and I wonder if you are real sometimes...your writings sound like romance novels or fairy tales to me...and I only hope one day that I can write like this from my heart... but for now, I just don't believe |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such happiness shines in this light and lovely read. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Oh so romantic... *sighs* A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you paint such a beautiful picture with your soft words |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Janet Marie, Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it...and the font, too......  . . Jason, Thank you. Maybe you and your wife can find a pretty river somewhere.... . . Robert, I'm glad that you liked it... . . . Eric, Thank you for your sweet words..... . . "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Dixie, Gary and I are very real....our love for each other is so real and our feelings so intense that it kind of scares me sometimes. It's better than anything I've ever experienced before,in fact, and such a relief from my hurtful experiences in the past. . . As I've said before, I write about our love so much, because it's the happiest thing in my life. . . I really hope that you will find a love that is not so painful very soon, friend. Oh, and don't ever think you're being disrespectful to me....you're much too sweet and nice to do that. Thank you, Lady... . . Hugs from me to you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, thank you, sweet lady, for your nice reply.... . Vandana, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. thank you... . sellout007, I'm glad you thought it was romantic..... . Susan, Thank you for the sweet words. I appreciate that.... . . . Love and hugs to you all...  Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - very romantic from one to another, and with sweet tender words from your pen. Lovely, just lovely... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Bill. I'm glad that you liked it... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes you are a romantic, my dear friend, and this is gorgeous!!!!!!!!! Some poets write, but some paint with their visions, and put them into words. You are a painter, and I forever enjoy your canvasses... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sunny. I really appreciate your sweet reply...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, you have painted such a beautiful, romantic image here. You do this very well. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, Sue. I appreciate that....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love velvet blankets and imagining the ocean and moonlight as velvet made me tingle! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, I think this would make a wonderful poetry book submission, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you very much. I had already put another one in the other forum for submission to the book. I maybe should have put this one, though, if you think so. Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, this is real good i liked it |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
"Do you know that I love you as much as the whole world and back around again" I love the chronicles of your caring for your man!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
U are a real romantic soul! angsana |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so romantic Ethel! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Carol, I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you very much... . . Ken, Thank you so much. I'm really glad that you are enjoying reading them.... . . Hugs to you both, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 03:17 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Angsana, Thank you for your reply. I really like that... . . Nancy Lee, Thank you, sweet lady. I really appreciate you.... . . Heart Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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